Sunday, September 6, 2009

Job Application Letter

Joanne Lee Yan Yun

address

address

Handphone: (+65) 9

2nd September 2009

Wilson Chan

CEO

ISUN LLP

Dear Mr. Chan,

I am writing to express my interest for the post of PSLE Science Coach, in response to the job posting in JobsCentral.com on 2nd September 2009. I am currently in my last year of study in the National University of Singapore and will graduate in 2010 with Bachelors in Life Science (Biomedical Science). The accomplishments noted in the accompanying resume will illustrate the value and vision that I can bring to your company.

I have built a solid foundation of Science knowledge over the course of my study. Being one of the instrumental planners for the Science Enrichment Week in National Junior College, I formulated mind-boggling and engaging Science Experiments to appeal to the participants. In addition, my previous job experience at A* Consultants has equipped me with invaluable skills on drawing up effective lesson plans and I have demonstrated the success of my strategic result-oriented planning via the continuous participation of schools in the enrichment programmes that I have conducted. I also had to liaise directly with school teachers to understand the objectives that they wish to achieve and the students’ needs, thus I have developed an insightful perspective of children aged between 9 to 12 years old.

Having to coordinate between school teachers and trainers under A* Consultants, I have honed my effective interpersonal communication skills. I possess an excellent track record for meeting all deadlines and delivering high quality proposals. Furthermore, my ability to productively handle up to three projects at one time has validated my proficiency in project management, thus I can take on the leadership role to spearhead further development of the company when the need arises.

In review of your company's objectives and possible openings, my qualifications and experience are in perfect tune with your current needs. If your company is looking for an independent and results-oriented professional with a solid performance track record, I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss the value of my strengths and experience and the possibility of joining your dynamic company. I can be reached at the handphone number above but I will call you on 10th September 2009 to ensure that my resume has reached you. Thank you for your time and I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Joanne Lee

So sorry, blogspot screw up the format! I can't separate the paragraphs.

3 comments:

  1. Well done, Joanne! You have written concretely, and with completeness.

    A few points to note:
    Inside address incomplete?
    Possible openings? What other positions are advertised?
    "The accomplishments noted in the accompanying resume will illustrate the value and vision that I can bring to your company." - better to move to closing paragraphs?

    Ms. Lim

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  2. Hi Joanne

    Wow! You described in detail your achievements that are highly relevant to the job position. I can also sense a good dose of 'you' attitude in this letter.

    You might want to include your full name at the end to make it look more formal. But other than that, you had written a very good job application letter. Good work!

    Regards
    Ji Shen

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  3. Hello Ms. Lim, I am glad to know that I managed to write effectively! Thank you for your feedback for me to work on.

    Hello Jishen, thank you for the 'wow!' haha. I do hope that this application letter will be put to good use in future!

    Thanks,
    Joanne

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